while

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Misused word
while

Alternatives
although, whereas

Explanation
Avoid using “while” to mean “although” or “whereas” if there is any chance of ambiguity. In the example below, “while” could mean either “although” or “at the same time that.”

Example
  “While Gloria lost money in the slot machine, Tom won it at roulette.”

  “Although Gloria lost money in the slot machine, Tom won it at roulette.”

Source
A Writer’s Reference by Diana Hacker [Sixth Edition]

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